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rising magma flows

through tears on the ocean floor

our foundations shake

©2017 Becoming Unstuck,

Written for Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge: flow & tear


20 thoughts on “shaken

  1. “Our foundations shake.” I love this. I always get hung up on “our” & its syllables. Depending on where one is located, it’s a tricky word. This is lovely, Mags.

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      1. Not in the South, it’s not. Lol. I cannot tell you how many people, including myself pronounce it like “hour”, thus “ow-wer” instead of “ouer”. *Kicks rocks*

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